Point of order on the technicals, at the end she says isn't it time we stand up and say, "We've had enough"
I've left out the error .. ok now I'll put it in
.. isn't it time to stand up and say, "We've had enough?"
which is like writing, 'isn't it time to stand up and say, we've ...er, had enough ??'
This question mark needs to be replaced with a full stop. An emphatic not over the top, flat, final, mind made up, certitude without over or understatement
"we've had enough."
I rule out the exclamation mark even given the younger audience.
That aside no other issues. Very good, 9.05/10
That will be 2,660 guineas, usual address
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